I was excited about getting feedback until I saw the person I was paired with for a consultation. He was a man of average height with red hair and she wore glasses. This guy wasn't a complete stranger to me. I had seen him several times during my visit to the writing room. I walked towards the table where he had prepared all the utensils he uses to examine the papers. I spoke to him in a very warm manner and in his response it was clear to me that he really lacked people skills. Her personality reminded me a lot of Mrs. Zeigler. I sat down with him and began to explain what my article was about and why I needed to write it. The paper I presented to him was a paper I had previously written for my research and methods class. I thought it was a pretty decent paper because I got a B in it. The paper was based on a behavioral study I conducted with two other members of the class. Before he even read the first sentence, he had already started criticizing the newspaper. He started to correct the paper but all I saw were big red lines, circles and arrows everywhere. I knew from the ink in his pen that he had much to suggest. As we went through the document together, he explained to me that he didn't understand the document and that I needed to present it in a more simplistic way. It was